Sunday, November 25, 2012
Allegory of the Cave Sonnet
Living in the shadows
Blinded by their own ignorance
Never stepping out of their rows
As to them it hadn’t any sense
Chained down by their own mind
To only see what was displayed
Never realizing what was outside
Or that they were being played
Until one saw the light
And followed it out of the cave
He now was full of insight
No longer a knave
His full potential was realized
No longer being told a lie
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I like it a lot, great job. Very good rhymes and diction.
ReplyDeleteits simple and straight to the point. good rhyming i especially like your 3rd stanza great job Eddie!
ReplyDeleteI agree with katelyn. I like the last two lines
ReplyDeleteI like your sonnet but it is a bit hard to read because on my iPod it shows up as one giant paragraph rather than four stanzas. Could you please comment to my blog as well?
ReplyDeleteIt's good eddie. It would better if you separated the lines, but great job overall.
ReplyDeleteNice sonnet Eddie! Great imagery. (:
ReplyDeleteGreat job, really enjoyed reading it. wish you would have formated it better though
ReplyDeleteI like the lines...
ReplyDelete"To only see what was displayed
Never realizing what was outside"
they are well written. If you were to change the formatting, it would help the reader but other than that, good job!